At my school, we have been working on slideshows, where we have to explain how to be the best version of yourself. In my opinion I think that I have done a pretty good job, but if you have any advice on how to make it better please let me know in the comment section, but make sure it is positive and kind. Thank you:)
Friday, April 9, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Lexi its Abby here
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this blog post it is soo good I screenshot it for me!
Remember to put in full stops and captail letters.
This reminds me of when I was in Korimako and I did something like this.
Have fun in the holidays.
- Abby.
Thanks Abby, will try and remember to put in all the punctuation needed hope you have fun in the holidays too.
DeleteHey Lexi i'm Molly from toroa,Thanks for sharing your slide i really enjoy reading all of your advice to be a better me. I love the way you have presented your work its really clear and easy to understand and you have remembered to add capitals and full stops. You have done a great job and i can tell you tried your best to make it as good as you can and i hope you have a great holiday.
ReplyDeleteThanks Molly I did try my best and i think i will go check out your blog! also i hope you have a great holiday as well😗
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